作业帮修改一段英语主要是修改语法问题,要是有更合适的句子更好了.This time,I didn't feel upset when the reality strongly struck to me.I had already known these things will happen at last.Therefore I'm calm with no disappointment,and
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修改一段英语
主要是修改语法问题,要是有更合适的句子更好了.
This time,I didn't feel upset when the reality strongly struck to me.I had already known these things will happen at last.Therefore I'm calm with no disappointment,and think "Anyhow life will go on,whether you full of sadness or not."
I'm glad your appearance in my life during my best ages,just as a bunch of sunshine bursts into the darkness.
Both of us will be a better person for now and in the future,I always believe firmly.
1.strongly struck to me-------- struck me (stike是及物动词直接接me)
2. know these things will happen at last --------that would happen at last.
【 这里要用定语从句,因是things, 所以引导词是 that,前面用的是过去完成时,后面不能用一般将来时态, 要 用过去将来时 would】
3. whether you full of sadness or not--------are full of sadness or not 【full 是形容词,因此前面要用是动词】
4. Both of us will be a better person----------Both of us will be better persons 【both of us 是复数,所以是better persons.
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