TheoneImet（2）作文

精选作文:TheoneImet（2）作文

                                The one I met（2）

Since Mount Qianfo is need not tickets every day after7:30p.m.He asked me to hike with him as a free travel when we onthe small final text of the IELTS course. 

As a ‘professional mountaineer’—who had gone to MontTai forno less than seven times, I quiet clearly understood what thisnight trip mean, in stead of hiking itself and appreciatinglandscapes, endless talking and communication are the real points.In other words, we would stroll up to the mountain meanwhilehanging around in each other’s past and memory.

We got to know each other today and say farewell tomorrow.What kind of sad things, but he is a boy, whatever. Then we start.

The Mount QianFo has an optimal height: not too high toreach the top within two hours, and not too low to feel worthless.  On the top of the mountainconspicuously stands a pavilion, which was surrounded by 16 strongyellow lights so that it can be seen at bottom as glorious as ashinning palace in the sky. 

篇一：英语2

英语作文

一类：我的某某人，如老师，妈妈，同学，

朋友等。

题目：MyMother（我的母亲）/TheOneILoveMost（我最爱的人）/MyFamily（我的家庭）/TheManILoveMostinMyLife（生命中我最爱的人）/MyFather（我的父亲）/MyBelovedGrandparents（我挚爱的祖父母）

MymotherisanEnglishteacher.Sheisabeautifullady.Shehasaroundfaceandbrighteyes.Sheisalwayssmiling.

Mymotherisagoodteacher.Sheworksveryhard.Everydayshecomestoschoolveryearlyandisalwaysthelastonetoleave.ShespeaksverygoodEnglishandsheteacheswell.Shealsotellsherstudentswhataretherightthingstodo.Sheisamotherlyteacher.Shetreatsherstudentsasherownchildrenandtakesgoodcareofthem.Sheissokindthateveryonelovesher.

Thisismymother.IfeelsoluckytohaveherasmymotherandIloveher.IhopethatsomedayIcanbeateacherjustlikeher.

二类：计划类，如国庆计划安排，新年安排，

假期安排等。

题目：MyPlanfortheNationalDayHoliday（我的国庆假期计划）/TheChineseNewYear（中国新年）/MyPlanfortheSpringFestival（我的春节计划）/MyPlanforSummerVacation（我的暑假计划）

TheNationalDayHolidayiscoming.ItisaveryimportantfestivalinChina.EverybodyhashisorherplanfortheNationalDayHoliday.Ihaveaplan,too.Myplanisasfollows:

First,I’lltakeagoodrest,asI’malwaysbusywithmywork.Second,Iwanttostaywithmyparents.I’mnotusuallytogetherwiththem.Third,Iwanttomeetsomeofmyfriendsandrelatives,asthesedayswedon’tseeeachotheroften.Fourth,Iwanttogivemyroomagoodcleaning.Finally,IwillstudyEnglishforthecomingexamination.

ThisismyplanforthecomingNationalDayHoliday

三类：学习类

题目：WhyIStudyEnglish?（我为什么学习英语？）/WhyDoStudentsLikeLearningEnglish?（为什么学生喜欢学习英语？）/WhyILikeLearningEnglish?（为什么我喜欢学英语？）

Englishisaninternationallanguage.Itisveryuseful.IlikeEnglishverymuch.Andthisis

howIstudyEnglish.

First,Iremember30Englishwordseveryday.Second,Igooverthegrammarpointsregularly.Third,IreadarticlesinEnglishnewspaperandIreadsimplenovelsinEnglish.Fourth,IlistentoEnglishradioprogramsandwatchEnglishTVprograms.Finally,IlistentoEnglishmusicandwatchEnglishmovies.

ThisishowIstudyEnglish.Asaresult,I’mmoreandmoreinterestedinEnglishandmyEnglishhasimprovedgreatly.Practicemakesperfect.IfIkeeppracticing,IbelievethatmyEnglishwillbebetterandbetter.

四类：优点和缺点

题目：Television/AboutTelevision（电视）

TVplaysthevitalroleinourlife.TVcanbeseeneverywhereinourdailylife.AlmosteachfamilyhasoneTVset.However,thereisagoodsideandabadsidetoeverything,andTVisnoexception.

TVhasitsadvantages.TVisveryimportanttohelpmetogetinformationandknowledge.VariousTVprogramsmakemegettoknowtheworldandhelpmewithmystudies.

However,TValsohasitsdisadvantages.WatchingtoomuchTVprogramcanwastealotoftime.Someprogramsareboringanduseless,andtheycanbringusbadinformation.

So,everycoinhastwosides,weshouldchoosetherightone.

五类：运动类

题目：DoPhysicalExercise（锻炼身体）/AboutPhysicalExercise（体育锻炼）/TheSportActivitiesILikeBest（我最喜欢的体育活动）/Sports（运动）

Everyonehopestolivehappilyintheworld.Thereisafamoussaying:lifeliesonexercise.Soexercisecanhelpyoulivelongerandmorehealthily.

First,exerciseisgoodforustobuildourbodies.Itmakestheheartbeatfasterandmakeusstranger.Sportscanalsomakeuseatmorethanusualwhichcontributestoourbodies.

Second,exercisecanmakeushappy.Somesportlikebasketballisinteresting.Soplayingbasketballcanbringusintohappiness.

Third,exercisecanhelpusgetridofourbadhabits.Wewillnotbelazyafteraperiodofexercise.

Inaword,exerciseisimportant,helpfulandabsolutelynecessary.

六类：远程教育学习

题目：MyExpectationoftheLong-DistanceEducation（对远程教育的期望）

Now,IamastudentofShanghaiDistanceEducationCollege.Inotherwords,Iamadistancelearner.Ihavealotofexpectationsonmydistanceeducation.First,IwanttoimprovemyspokenEnglish.Iworkinaforeigninvestedcompany.Mybossisaforeigner.IneedtotalkwithhiminEnglisheveryday.SoIwouldliketoimprovemyspokenEnglishverymuch.Second,IhopetoimprovemyEnglishwritingability.IneedtoreceiveandansweremailsinEnglisheveryday,butIdon’tknowmanyEnglishwords.

Theseabovearemyexpectationsofthelong-distanceeducation.

七类：书信类

信件要求：1.介绍你的近况。2.请他帮你买英语口语书。3.欢迎他方便时来访。

Dec16st

,2012

DearTom,

Haven’theardfromyouforsometime!Howareyoudoing?EverythingisfinewithmeexceptthatthefinalexaminationisgettingnearerandnearerandI’mbusypreparingforit.

I’vegotsomeproblemsinmyEnglishstudy,especiallyinspokenEnglish.Myteacherrecommendedmeabook.ThebookiscalledAdvancedSpokenEnglish.Butitisnotsoldhereinmytown.SinceyouareinBeijing,couldyoubuyoneforme?I’dbeverygratefulifyoucouldhelpme.

Wehaven’tseeneachothersincelasttimewemet.Ihopethatyouwillvisitmyhometownagainsometimeifpossible.Somuchhaschangedthatyoucouldbarelyrecognizeit!Anditwouldbegreattobetogetherwithyouonceagain.

Lookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.

Bestwishes!Yours,Alice

八类：看法类。

此类套用一篇范文，范文如下：

Citylifeandsuburbanlife（城市生活和郊区生

活）/Livinginabigcity生活在大城市

Differentpeoplehavedifferentviewsonlifeincityorsuburb.Somepeopleprefertoliveincitywhileothersprefertoliveinsuburb.Itistruethatlivinginbigcityisconvenientandentertaining.Therearerestaurants,supermarkets,

shopping

malls

in

your

neighborhood.Youcaneasilybuyanystuffyouneed.Incontract,livinginsuburbisquitedifferent.Itservesfreshairandbeautifulsceneryandthemostimportantthingisquietness.Forme,Iliketoliveinbigcitybecauseofthecolorfullifeandconvenienceforworking.9、写作

Instructions:建议你在30分钟内，根据下面所给的题目和提纲用英语写出一篇不少于80词的短文。

1．你最喜欢哪本书；2．你喜欢的理由。

TheBookILikeBest

ThebookIlikebestis"TheLittlePrince"

becauseIthinkIhavebenefitedalotfromreadingit.Ibelieveallofyoumusthaveheardsomethingaboutthis,right?ItwasinmyprimaryschoolthatIbegantoreadit.Myparentsboughtmethebookasabirthdaypresent.butlaterIabandoneduntillastyearIboughtanewone.

ALittlePrinceisafairytale.Someoneregarditasabookwrittenonlyforchildren.However,whenyoureadthisbookatdifferentage,youwillhavedifferentfeelingstowardthebook.Theauthormadeusfindourlostnaivety.Whenwegotlostintherealworld,maybeitisagoodwaytogetsomereliefbyreadingthisbook.Itremindsusatruth:weareyoung,oratleastwewereyoung.

Thisbookisdefinitelyagreatone.sofarIhavereaditfivetimes.Itismyfavoritebook!10、写作

Instructions:建议你在30分钟内，根据下面所给的题目和提纲用英语写出一篇不少于80词的短文。

1．你特别喜欢的食物；2．你喜欢的理由。

MyFavouriteFood

Likemanydifferentkindsoffood,eggsaremyfavoritekind.Eggiscontainsalotof

essentialnutrientsneededbythehumanbody,andit'scommonlyfoundinalmostanypartoftheworld.

Eggsareovalshapedsphereswithalightbrowncolordependingontheegg.Eggsisthebasicingredienttomanydishes,likeomeletandFrenchtoast.Youcaneasilygeteggsatanysupermarkets,andtheyaresoldforaverycheappricetoo.Aftertheeggsareacquired,itisbesttocrackitopenintoapanorplateandstiritevenly.Iftheeggistobepanfried,thenjustcracktheeggintotheboilingpan,andremembertoflipsides.

Aneggcontainslotsofnutrientsandisaverygoodsourceofenergy.Soldiersusedtocarryeggstothefrontlineastheirfood.Eggismyfavoritekindoffood.11、写作

Instructions:建议你在30分钟内，根据下面所给的题目和提纲用英语写出一篇不少于80词的短文。

1.你在英语学习中遇到什么困难；2.你如何克服这些困难。

HowtoOvercomeDifficultiesinMyEnglish

Studies

Asaninternationallanguage,EnglishisthefirstchoiceofChineselearnersforthepurposeofcommunicatingwithworldoutside.However,itisreallydifficultformanyChinesestudentstolearnEnglish.Firstofall,it’sveryhardforthemtorememberthewordswhicharethefoundationofalanguage.Secondly,eventhoughtheydoremembersomewords,theydon’tknowhowtoexpressthemselvesinEnglish.Andmostdifficultofall,itisverydifficultforChinesestudentstounderstandwhattheyheardinEnglish.Inaword,vocabulary,structures,listeningandspeakingaremaindifficultiesforChinesestudentstolearnEnglishasaforeignlanguage.

Astothesolutionstotheproblems,thesaying“practicemakesperfect”canexplaineverything.Theonlywayforustolearnalanguagewellistolistenmore,speakmore,readmore,andwritemore.Themorewepractice,thebetterwecanmasterEnglish.

12、写作

Instructions:建议你在30分钟内，根据下面所给的题目和提纲用英语写出一篇不少于80词的短文。

1.介绍家庭主要成员；

2.描述令你难忘的家庭活动。

MyFamily

Thereare5peopleinmyfamily,myparents,mywife,mydaughterandme.ThisisalittlebittraditionalChinesefamily.Myparentshaveretiredfromtheirwork.Besidesenjoyingtheirownlife,theywouldalsohelptotakecareofourdaughterbecausemywifeandIareverybusy.

Everyweekend,thewholefamilywouldgotoclimbGeleMountainwhichisoneofthesweetestmomentsinmyfamily.Wewouldclimbuptothetopofthemountain,andenjoythefreshairintheforest.Nothingcancomparethejoyofachievingthesamegoalofthefamilytogether.13、写作

Instructions:建议你在30分钟内，根据下面所给的题目和提纲用英语写出一篇不少于80词的短文。

1.自学的优点；

2.自学中遇到的主要困难。

Self-study

Therearevariouswaystogetbettereducation.Wemaygotoschooltoreceiveformaleducation.Wemayattendsometrainingclasses.Ofcourse,wemayalsostudyourselves.Self-studyisveryconvenientforustomanage.Firstofall,weknowexactlywhatwewant,sothatwecanarrangewhateverweneed.Secondly,self-studyisespeciallyhelpfulforthosewhohavealreadyhadajobtodealwith.Thetimeforthemtostudyismuchmoreflexible.

However,itisnoteasytocarryoutself-studyforcommonpeople.Wemaystopourstudywhenwearenotstrong-willedenough.Anyway,studyingneedstimeandenergy,wemayhaveenoughexcusestogiveitup.Besides,wemayalsostopourstudybecausewecannotfind15、写作

Instructions:建议你在30分钟内，根据下面所给的题目和提纲用英语写出一篇不少于80词的短文。

Whichismoreimportant,HealthorWealth?1.介绍你对健康与财富之间关系的看法；2.简述你持有以上看法的理由。

Insomepeople’seyes,lifewithoutwealthwouldbemiserablebecausetheessentialneedsofourlifecannotbemeetbecauseofpoverty.Somepeoplebelievethatnomatterhowrichwemightbe,withoutahealthybody,

wecouldnotenjoywhatwehavegained.

WhenIhavetomakeachoicebetweenwealthandhealth,Iwouldpreferhealth.Inmyeyes,wealthisalwayssomethingthatcannotdecidewhetherwecanliveinthiswonderfulworld.Withlessmoney,wemayleadsimplelife.Withmoremoney,wemayleadabetterlife.Nomatterwhatkindoflifewecanhave,wewillbeabletoenjoythecolorfulworldbecausewearehealthy.Ifwewerenothealthyenough,wemaynotonlylosetheopportunitytosurvive,butalsobecomeaburdenofourfamily.Soitishightimeforthosewhoarepursuingthemoneytopaymoreattentiontotheirhealthnow.17、写作

Instructions:建议你在30分钟内，根据下面所给的题目和提纲用英语写出一篇不少于80词的短文。

WhichMeansofTransportationdoYouPrefer?内容需包括以?a href="http://www.zw2.cn/zhuanti/guanyuluzuowen/" target="_blank" class="keylink">路矫妫?/p>

1.哪一种是你最喜欢的交通方式；2.阐述你的理由。

Withtheadventofmoderntechnology,themeansoftransportationhasbecomevarious.Bike,car,train,andplanearebecomingthebasicneedsofpeopletoday.Amongthesevariouskindsoftransportation,Iwouldpreferbikes.

Whentimeisnotthefirstthingtobeconsidered,Ialwayschoosebiketogotoschool.Itisnotonlyenvironmentallyfriendlybutalsoavoidsthemoreandmoreheavytrafficinthecitynow.Besides,ridingbikeisakindofefficientpracticewhichisverygoodtoourhealth.So,hereI’dliketoappealforallthosepossibletoridebiketoschoolorofficeforourhealth,fortheenvironmentandforthecitytransportation.18、写作

Instructions:建议你在30分钟内，根据下面所给的题目和提纲用英语写出一篇不少于80词的短文。

MyFavoriteSeason内容需包括以下方面：

1．说明自己最喜欢的季节；

2．陈述喜欢这一季节的原因，可以描写这一季节的景色，或是记述在这一季节最让人难忘的经历。

Amongthefourseasonsinayear,Ilikewintermost.Winteristhelastseasonofthe

year,anditisusuallytheseasontositdowntoIthinkweareluckytobeborninsuchalookbackwhatwehavedoneintheyearandfastchangingworld.Withthesechanges,wemakeawishtothenextyear.

wouldexperiencemoreandourlifewouldbeSomemaycomplainthatitistoocoldinmoremeaningful.winter.However,wealsoknowthatitisthiscoldnessthatfreezethepestsinthefarmlandandmakeaharvestnextyearpossible.Thinkingofthis,Ibelievethecoldnessinwinterisbearable.Ialsolikethesightviewofwinter

especiallyafteraheavysnow.Theworldbecomessowhite,sosoftthatIfeelsatisfiedandinnerpeaceinthisseason.19、写作

Instructions:建议你在30分钟内，根据下面所给的题目和提纲用英语写出一篇不少于80词的短文。

ParentsAretheBestTeachers内容需包括以下方面：

1.你对"父母是最好的老师"的看法；2.举例说明你的观点。

Educationistakingplaceinschoolandinfamilyaswell,whichiswidelyaccepted。

Inschool,wehaveteachersandinfamilywehaveparents.Parentsareoftenthebestteachertochildrenbecausechildrenwouldspendmostoftheyoungeryearswiththeirparentswhichmighthaveasignificanteffectonchildren.

Myparentsarebestteacherstome.IwaseducatedtobeajustmaneversinceIwasbornbymyparents.AndtheywouldguidemetothedoorofthedramaticworldofknowledgewhenIwasveryyoungwhichinfluencesmyinterestsandwhole-lifebusinessalot.IlovemyparentsforwhatevertheyhavedoneformeandIamsureIwouldbeaverygoodteacherofmychildren.20、写作

Instructions:建议你在30分钟内，根据下面所给的题目和提纲用英语写出一篇不少于80词的短文。

1.你生活中有哪些变化；2.你对此的感受。

ChangesinMyLife

Lifewithoutchangeishorrible.Icouldnotimaginealifeofapersonwithoutchange.First,ourlifestylewouldchangewiththechangeofourlivingenvironment.Secondly,ourattitudetowardslifewouldchangewhenweexperiencemore.Forexample,whenapersonsufferstoomanytroublesinhislife,hemightleadanegativeattitudetowardslifewhichwouldhaveaprofoundeffectonhim.

篇二：高中英语作文短文改错练习题精选

RowenaandBillyWrangleraremodelhighschoolstudents.Theystudyhard.Theydoextremewellon

achievementtests.Andnextyear,RowenawillattendingHarvardUniversity.Billy,heryoungerbrother,hoetogotoCornell.ThatmakesRowenaandBillydifferentfrommoststudentsisthattheydon?tgotoschool.Infact,they'veneverbeentoschool.Sinceakindergarten,theyhavestudiedathome.NeitherRowenaorBillyfeelsasiftheyhavemissedoutonnothingbybeingtaughtathome.AsmanyofthemorethanonemillionpeoplewhoreceivehomeschoolingintheUnitedStates,theyfeelifthey

havegottenagoodeducation.

短文改错练习（2）

Didyouenjoyyourselfyesterday?Isupposeyoudo.ButI?dliketotellyouwhatabaddayIhadyesterday.Nothing

justwentwrong.Onthemorning,myalarmclockdidn?tring,sinceIwokeupanhourlate.IwasinsuchahurrythatIburntmyhandwhenIwascookingthebreakfast.ThenIranoutofthehousetocatchthe8:30buses.ThisisthebusIusuallytake.But,youmaylaugh,Imisseditofcourse.Iamveryunhappy,andscaredaswellbecauseteacherhatesthestudentscominglatetoschool.SoIranthreemilestoschoolonlytodiscoverthatnobody

wasthere.Theschoolwasquietbutpeaceful.Ourclassroomwaslocked.Irealizedthatmoment:ItwasSunday.

短文改错练习（3）

Getagoodeducationismoreimportanttodaythaneverbefore.InCanadamostlychildrenattendpublicschools.Publicschoolsaremainlyfoundbygovernmentsthroughtaxincome.StudentsinCanadataughtinEnglishandinFrench.TherestsofCanadianchildrenattendprivateschools,thataresupportedmainlybyfeespayingbyparents.Bylaw,thechildrenmustattendtheschoolfromage5to16.ThereareseveraldifferentlevelsintheCanadianeducationsystem.ThefirstwascalledElementarySchools,whichincludekindergartens

throughgrade7or8.

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Yesterdaywewenttoplanttreesonthehillnearto1.

ourschool.Theboysweremadedigpits(坑).The2.girlsweretoldtoplanttheyoungtreesintothepits.3.Allofusworkedveryhardly.Soonwewereallwet4.withsweat.Aftertheyoungtreesplanted,we5.begantowaterit.Thewaterwasatthefootof6.thehill.Butwestoodinlinetopasspails(桶)7.ofwaterfromonetootheruptothehill.8.Wedidnotfinishwaterthetreesuntilitwasdark.Thoughweweretired,wefeelveryhappy.

短文改错练习（5）

AfewmonthsafterreturningtheUSfromGermany,ItookpartinacollegecourseinFrench.SinceIhavelearnedtospeakGermangoodinGermany,Ithoughtthatitmightbeinterestedtobeginstudyinganotherlanguage.Atthefirstclass,theteacheraskedustodoapronunciationexercise,inwhichhewouldsayonewordortwoinFrench,andeachstudentwoulddotheirbesttocopy.Whenhegottome,hekepthavingmetosaymorewords,andIfinallyaskedhim

why.“Ifinditgreatfuns.It?sthefirsttimeI?veheardanAmericanspeakFrenchwithaGermanaccent.”heexplainedit.

短文改错练习（6）

Itwasfineyesterday.Thesunwasshininginthesky.Iwentboatingbymyself.Ididn?ttakemanyfriendswithmebecauseIwantedtorowalone.Ihiredaboatandrowedslowlytothecenteroflake.

Afreshbreezewasblowing,fishwasswimmingandbirdsweresinging.WhenIreachedthecenter,Itookupthepaddles（桨）andliedownintheboat.WiththeblueskyovermeorgreenwateraroundmeIwasextremely

relaxed.OverabouttwohourspassedinthiswaybeforeI

knewthem.Icamebackhomeverylate.Ididn?tfeeltiringatall,forIhadreallyhadagoodtime.

短文改错练习（7）

Iwasanxiouslyexpectedyourletter,andatlastithasreachedtome.Iamverygladtoknowthateveryoneathomeisenjoyinggoodhealthasusually.

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9．101.________2________3________

Thingsherearesamenowastheywerebefore.The4________finalexaminationwilltakeplaceinnextweek.SoIamnowbusypreparingformylessons.It?snicetothinkthatthesummervacationiscomingnear.Ican?tsaymuchIwanttoseeyouallagain.

5________6________7________8________

Iamlookingforwardtospendsummerdayswithyou.9________GivemylovetoFather,Motherandanyoneathome.10________

短文改错练习（8）

Oneafternoon,whenIwasonmywayhome,theskychangedsuddenly.Darkcloudsweregathered.IbegantofeelworriedbecauseIdidn?thavebotharaincoatorumbrellaaboutme.Itsoonstartedtorain.

JustasIwashurryinghome,Iheardofsomeonecallingmefrombehind.IturnedtohavealookandfindthathewasLiuWei,agoodneighbourofmine.Heofferedtosharehisumbrellawithme.Wewalkedallthewayshome.WithoutLiuWei?shelp,Iwouldhavegotwettotheskin.HowmuchthankfulIwasforhishelp!

短文改错练习（9）

Iworriedaboutthemissedbagalltheevening.ItriedtorememberexactwhatIhaddonefromthetimeIleftthestoreuntilatthetimeIgothome.IrememberedwhetherIhadlookedatthebagwhileIwashavinglunch.SoImusthaveitwhenIleftthestore.Irememberedshowingittoafriendonthebus.ButIhadthebagthen.Icamedirectlyfromthebus

tomyhouse,andImusthaveforgottenitonthebus.Iwasinhurrytogetoffandforgottocheckthepackageslyingonthefloor.Ishouldbemuchcarefulnexttime.

短文改错练习（10）

Akindoflittlecarmaysomedaytakeplaceoftoday?sbigones.Ifpeopledrivesuchcarsinthefuture,therewouldbelesspollutioninthereair.Therewillbemorespacesforparkingcarsincities.Thestreetswillbelesscrowd.Anddrivingwillbesaferastheselittlecarscangoonly65kmperhour.Thefuturecarswillbefineforgettingroundacity,sotheywillnotbeusefulforlongtrips.Littlecarswillgo200km,beforeneedingtostopmoregas.Ifbigcars

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arestillusedalongwiththesmallones,twosetsofroadsthatwillbeneededinthefuture.Someroadswillbeusedforthebigfastcarsandanotherroadswillbeneededfortheslowsmallones.Itissaidthatthirdsuchlittlecarsfitinthespacenowneededforonecartheusualsize.

短文改错练习（11）

DearBob,ImustsaythatIdoagreewithyou.Thoughyoufindsomething,butitdoesn?tmeanitbelongstoyou.Ifyoucanfindwhoitbelongsto,youshouldtrytoreturnbackit.I?msureyouwouldwantsomeonetodosameforyou.OnceIfoundabeautifulpicture.Iwantedtokeepit.ThenIrememberedseeonejustlikeitinanoffice.Iwenttotheofficeandfoundthepersontowhoitbelonged.Theladywasveryhappytogetbackandgavemedeliciousapples.Soyousee,Bob,Igettworewards:oneIcouldeatandanotherIcouldkeepinmyheart.

Yours,LiMing

短文改错练习（12）

MrZhangisoversixtyyearsold.Hehasretired（退休）.

Heisoneofmyrespectedteachers.Heteachesus

chemistrywhenwewereinseniorGradeOne.Hewasold,andhetaughtusgood.Hetriedhisbesttomakehisclasseslively.

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MrZhangusuallymadegoodpreparationsforthelessonandwasstricttous,too.Wheneverwemademistakesinourhomework.hewouldaskustocorrectthem.Atthattime,Iwasusedtobepoorlyinchemistry.MrZhangoftenhelpedmewithmystudiesverypatiently.Withhishelp,Ihadmaderapidprogressandcaughtwiththeclass.Heisalwaysverykindtoeverystudent.

Asanexperiencedteacher,heisrespectedandlovedbyallthestudents.

短文改错练习（13）

Ican?tswimbecauseIhaveastrongfearofwater.Lookbackatmychildhoodexperience,Ithinkthatthreereasonmightexplainthefear.ThefirstreasonisthatIwasnotallowedtogonearthewaterwhenIwasachild,formymotherhadunreasonablefearofit.So,evenasachildIwastaughtseethewaterassomethingdanger.Second,myeyes

2.

短文改错练习（14）

Mostpeoplewhoareambitiousandwanttoachievesomethingliveonstress.Theyneedthem.Iliketouse

examplefromtheanimalworldbecausethereisabiological

basisforwhatIsay.Ifyoutakeaturtleandforceittorunwithasfastasarace-horse,youshouldkillit.Soit?suselesstosaytoaturtletypehumanwhathemustachievethisbecausehisfatherwasfamousandhisgrandfatherwassuccessful.Youcan?tmakerace-horseoutofaturtle.Butthereverseisalsotrue.Ifyouaretherace-horsetype,asmoreefficientbusinessmenandpoliticiansare,youhavetheurgetodomanythingsandtoexpressyou.Ifyoutoldnottodoanything,youareunderterribledistress.

短文改错练习（15）

Haveyoueverheardfromthesaying:AllworkandnoplaymakeJackadullboy?Whatthismeansisthatifyoustudyallthetimesyouwillbecomeaboringperson.Youmustgooutandhavingfunwithyourfriends,otherwiseyouwilllosehim.Noonewantstobefriendswithsomeonewhoonlytalksaboutworkandstudy.

Perhapsyouhaveaconfidenceproblem.Pleasetryremember

whattheworkyoudoisforyourselfbutnooneelse.Youdonothavetocompetewithyourclassmates.Noonecouldbehappierinstudyingsevendaysandsevennightsinaweek.

短文改错练习（16）

DeareAbby,Howareyou?TodayI?vegotawonderfulnewstotellyou.IhaveofferedascholarshipatauniversityinAustraliaformyfurthereducation.Onehundredandtwentystudentstookexam

forit,butonlyafewwaschosenandIwasoneofthem.However,myparentsarenothappyaboutit.Theyarestrongagainstmegoingthere.TheysayitistoofarawaythattheywillnotseemeforawholeyearandtheyareafraidofIwillfeellonely.Theycan'timagineagirlsoyounglivealone.Theyadvisemetostudyinthecapitalinstead.ThenI?llbeabletocontinuelivingwith

them.HowcanIpersuadethemtoacceptthefactIhavegrownup?BestWishesJane

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篇三：英语作文汇总

SocialLetters:

1.感谢信(LetterofThanks)

Thingstoincludeinthank-younotes:

?Thedatethatyouareactuallywritingthenote.

?Foraninformalthank-you,usethenameasitiswrittenonthegiftcard

youreceived.Forexample,theindividual’snameisJames,butonthe

gift’scardhewrote“FromJimmy,”soonyourthank-younoteitwouldbe

“DearJimmy…”

?Onaformalthank-younote,youwouldput“DearMr.andMrs.Brown…”

?Mentionthegiftinyourthank-younote:“Thankyouverymuchforthe

lovelycandlesticks…”

?Mentionwhatyou’llusethegiftfor:“We’llhavemanyromanticnightswith

theselovelycandles?”or“JohnandIwillthinkofyoueverytimewemake

atoast?”or“Itwillkeepmewarmthiswinterwhenit’scoldandsnowy

outside…”

?Closingtermscanbe,“Sincerely,Mary,”“Love,Mary,”“Affectionately,

Mary”,“WithAppreciation,Mary.”

Herearesomeusefulexpressionstoshowyourappreciationforhis/hersupportand/orfriendship:

?I’msogratefulthatyouareapartofmylife.

?I’mreallygladtohaveyouasmybestfriend.

?Itwassothoughtfulandkindofyoutogivemesomeofyour

valuabletime.Can’tthankyouenough.

?Yoursupport/friendshipmakesaworldofdifference.Thankyoufor

beingthere.

?Pleaseacceptmysincerestthanksfor…

?Ican’ttellyouhowmuchIappreciate…

?There’snowaytothankyouenoughfor…

?Whatadifferenceknowingyouhasmade/makesinmylife!

?Ithankmyluckystarsforthedaywemet!

21August,2003

DearMr.Smith,

I’mwritingtothankyouforyourhospitalityduringmyrecenttriptoGermany.

It’salwaysveryusefultomeetone’sbusinesspartnersfacetoface,andIthinkwehadsomeinteresting

discussions.

IlookforwardtoseeingyouwhenyouvisitLondoninSeptember.

Yourssincerely,

MarkHoward

29September,2003

DearPeter,

ThisisjustashortnotetothankyouforaverypleasanteveningwhileIwasinNewYork.

Itisalwaysgoodtoseeoldfriendsagainanditwasveryusefultoexchangeideas.

PleasegivemearingthenexttimeyoucometoLondon.Perhapswecanmeetforlunch.

Bestwishes.

Mark

notetoOliverandJenniferthankingthemforinvitingyoutoadinnerpartyheldattheir

homeonJanuary8,2004.

January15,2004

DearOliverandJennifer,

Thankyousomuchforthedelightfuleveningwehadatyourlovelyhomeacoupleofnightsago.Itwas

apleasuretoseeyouagainandenjoyyourwonderfulcooking.

Lookingforwardtoseeingyouagainsoon!Thanksagainforeverything.Sincerely,Frank&

Clark

2.祝贺信(LetterofCongratulation)

UsefulExpressions:

PleasedwiththeGoodNews.

?Iwaspleased/glad/delighted/thrilledtohearthat…

?Ihavejustheardthesplendidnews…

?Yourpromotion/appointmentto?givesmegreatpleasure.

?I’msohappyforyou…

?Howwonderfultohearthat…

?Whatterrificnews!

YouDeserveIt.

?Thisisamarvelousachievement,thoughnomorethanyoudeserve.

?Nooneismoredeservingthanyou.

?I’msurprisedatthegoodnewsatall—youdeserveeverybitofit.

?Iamveryhappytoseeyourworkfor?/yourabilitiesrecognizedinthisway.

?Iknowthatyourenthusiasmandexperiencearetheveryqualitiesthat

areneededforthisposition.

?Iamdelightedthatyourtalentandhardworkhavebeenrewarded.

BestWishesfortheFuture

?Iwishyoueverysuccess.

?Alltheverybestforthefuture.

?You’veabrightfutureinstore,forsure!

?You’reonyourway!

March,4th

DearSteve:

Thanksforyourhardworkindevelopingthedatabaseofoursalesandmarketingefforts.Youunderstoodthegoalsoftheprojectandourdepartmentfromtheverybeginning,anditshows.Iespeciallyliked

thesupportingdocumentationyoupreparedforthefinalproduct;

itwasrelevant,thorough,andmakestheproject

muchmoreuseful.You’veensuredauseful,stableproductthatwillbeasolidfoundationforyearstocome.

Yourtalentsinconceiving,developing,anddeliveringthisprojecthavebeenagreatassettoourdivision

andcompany.

Sincerely,AndrewLongMarch,4th

MydearJennie,

ImustsendyoualinetotellyouhowgladIamtolearnofyourengagementtoWillie.Heisagreat

friendofmycousinArthur,andwealllikehimsomuch.ArthurtoldmyhusbandyesterdayandIfeltthatImust

writeatonce,becausewearereallysogladbothforhimandforyou.Willyoucomeandseemewhenyoucan

andtellmeallaboutit,andifanytimeisfixedyet?Ofcourse,Iwanttoknoweverythingatonce.

Givemylovetoyourmother.Godblessyou,mydear,andwithfondestlove.

Yoursever,

Delia

March,4th

DearCharles,

IamverygladtohearthatyouhavebeenappointedGeneralManagerofyourcompany.Iknowhow

hardyouhaveworked,andyoucertainlydeserveit.Itisagreatpitywecan’tgettogethersoon.I’mgoingto

NewYorkfortwoweeksbutI’llgiveyouaringwhenIgetback.Meanwhile,alltheverybestforthefuture.

Yours,Frank

SupposeyourbusinesspartnerMr.Andersonhasbeenpromoted(晋升)tothepostofPresidentofHowardJoys,

Inc.Fillinthefollowingnoteofcongratulation,containing:

?Yourwarmestcongratulationsandbestwishesforhiseverysuccess.

?Yourhopethatyourbusinessrelationshipwillcontinuetodevelop.

DearMr.Anderson,

Ihavejustlearnedofyourpromotiontothe___1)______________

______________.Pleaseaccept________________2)______________

___________________________.

IhopethatwithyouattheheadofHJ,__________3)____________

___________________inthesamepleasantandtrustingmanner.

Yourssincerely,FrankClark1)postofPresidentofHowardJoys,Inc

2)mywarmestcongratulationsandbestwishesforyoureverysuccess

3)ourbusinessrelationshipwillcontinuetodevelop

SupposeyourfriendDavidhasbeenpromotedtotheRegionalManager(地区经理)forChina.Writeanote

ofabout50wordscongratulatinghim.Containthefollowing:

?Yoursincerecongratulationsonhispromotion.

?Yourwishforhissuccessinhisfuturework.

Suggestedanswer:

May2nd

DearDavid,

IhavejustheardofyourpromotiontotheRegionalManagerforChina.Pleaseacceptmywarmest

congratulations!

Lookingbackonyouractivitiessofar,Iknowthatyourenergyandexperiencearetheveryqualities

thatareneededforthisposition.Iwishyoueverysuccessinmanagingtheaffairsofthebranch.

Withkindestregards,Yours,John

Bonds

3.抱怨信及回复(LetterofComplaintandReply)(Book3.Unit6&

Unit7)

LetterofComplaint

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