谁能帮我改一下这篇英语作文,语法、语句问题.Hello,everybody!My name’s sophie.Today,the title of my speech is badminton—my favorite sport.I am fond of playing sports,because sports can keep my fit and healthy.When I’m free,I of

谁能帮我改一下这篇英语作文,语法、语句问题.
Hello,everybody!My name’s sophie.Today,the title of my speech is badminton—my favorite sport.
I am fond of playing sports,because sports can keep my fit and healthy.When I’m free,I often play sports with my friends at the sport centre.And we can have a good time when we play together.
Personally,my favorite sport is badminton.Why?There are many reason can let me love badminton.First,I think it is easy to play badminton.It doesn’t like tennis ,difficult to control.Badminton is a popular recreational sport.Besides,I llike badminton because it can make me feel a sense of accomplishment.Yes,I love it and good at it.And because of badminton,I made many new friends.I like to playing badminton,I like watching badminton matches,too.The one of reason why I like badminton is that Olympic Games and the best badminton player in the China of the game is Lin Dan.Lin Dan is my idol,just because of him I began to like badminton.However,the real reason why I like badminton is that play badminton can make my body better and better.Life depends on the sports.But for me,badminton is one of the meaning of my life.And playing badminton is not only can strengthen my body but
also make me excited and relaxed.Whenever I feel learning pressure of breath ,I will play badminton to relieve pressure.
Badminton is lots of fun and I hope everyone love badminton,too.

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Hello,everybody!
My name’s sophie.Today,the title of my speech is badminton—my favorite sport.
I am fond of playing sports,because①【 sports is helpful for my body.】When I’m free,I often play sports with my friends at the sport centre.②【Because】we can have a good time when we play together.
③【Personally,去掉】My favorite sport is badminton.Why?There are many④ 【reason 加s】⑤{can let me love badminton.改为for that】First,I think it is easy to play badminton.It doesn’t like tennis ,difficult to control.Badminton is a popular recreational sport.⑥【Besides改为Second】I llike badminton because it can make me feel a sense of accomplishment.Yes,I love it and good at it.⑦【And改为Third】 because of badminton,I made many new friends.I like to playing badminton,I like watching badminton matches,too.⑧【The one of reason改为Whatsmore】 why I like badminton is that Olympic Games and the best badminton player in the China of the game is Lin Dan.Lin Dan is my idol,just because of him I began to like badminton.
However,the real reason why I like badminton is that play badminton can make my body better and better.Life depends on the sports.But for me,badminton is one of the meaning of my life.And playing badminton is not only can strengthen my body but
also make me excited and relaxed⑨【and strength my character】.Whenever I feel learning pressure of breath ,I will play badminton to relieve pressure.
⑩【Badminton is lots of fun and I hope everyone love badminton,too.】
Badminton is so funthat I hope everyone can try to love it and enjoy it!

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,because sports can keep my fit and healthy 中的my 改为me；There are many reason can let me love badminton.该成there are virious reasons for me to love badmiton;.First,I think it is easy to play badminton.中的first 改为firstly；The one of reason 中的reason用复数；.Life depends on the sports中的介词the去掉；Whenever I feel learning pressure of breath ,I will play badminton to relieve pressure.这句话表达有问题，应改为Whenever I feel hard to continue my study,I will play badminton to relieve pressure.请问一下你现在是几年级了？

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