作业帮求高手看这篇英语作文有没有语法错误 或者时态问题 邀请信 邀请别人参加自己的生日聚会Dear Miss Li,How is everything?Nove.28th is my birthday.A birthday will be held in the hotel De Royal at 8:00 am on Nove.28th.I si
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求高手看这篇英语作文有没有语法错误 或者时态问题 邀请信 邀请别人参加自己的生日聚会
Dear Miss Li,
How is everything?Nove.28th is my birthday.A birthday will be held in the hotel De Royal at 8:00 am on Nove.28th.I sincerely invite you to join us.And we all look forward to seeing you there
Yours truly
XXX
1. Nov. 28. 就可以了如果是不正式的邀请函,不能多加e也不用加th,th是读的时候读的
2. Nove.28th is my birthday. A birthday will be held in the hotel De Royal at 8:00 am on Nove.28th,内容重复,被动的句子听起来很奇怪,因为如果能用主动句子就用主动的,被动句子是有保持距离感的作用,不需要被动.只要 I will hold my birthday party at DeRoyal Hotel at 8 a.m. on November 28.就可以了,
3. and在书写里只能作为连句并且小写： I sincerely invite you to join us and we all look forward to seeing you there
Dear Miss Li,
How is everything going? Nove.28th is my birthday. I will hold my birthday party in De Royal at 8:00 am on Nove.28th. I sincerely invite you to it. Please reply me before//// I'm looking forward to seeing you there.
Dear Miss Li,
Nice to write to you. My birthday is coming. A birthday party will be held in the hotel De Royal at 8:00 am on Nov.28. I sincerely invite you to join us. We all look forward to seeing you there.
应改为：
1.How is everything going？
2.Nov. 28
3.The birthday will be held
4.I sincerely invite you to join us and we all look forward to seeing you there
5.署名的truly有点奇怪，应删去或改为 sincerely