作业帮请大家帮忙修改这篇英语作文Hello,everyone.Very glad to be here.My nameis Wang Chang,and i am 13 years old.Now i am a student.My favorite subject is Chinese.Because it is very interesting.But i don't like P.E.Because it is too tired.Myfavo
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Hello,everyone.Very glad to be here.My nameis Wang Chang,and i am 13 years old.Now i am a student.My favorite subject is Chinese.Because it is very interesting.But i don't like P.E.Because it is too tired.Myfavorite star is Zhang Jie.Because he worked very hard.I like animals.My favorite animais are cats.Because they are cute.This is me.Thank you for listening.
哪里出现了语法错误,我会及时改正.
前面都可以,只是这句But i don't like P.E.Because it is too tired. 不能说体育太累了,应该说我上体育课太累了,所以应该改成I don't like P.E. Because I feel very tired in this subject (lesson). 其他的都还可以.挺好的自我介绍.
希望能帮到你,祝更上一层楼O(∩_∩)O
Hello,everyone.Very glad to be here.My name is Wang Chang,and i am 13 years old.Now i am a student. My favorite subject is Chinese, because(引导原因状语从句，最好不要独立成句） it is very interesting.But i don't like P...
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Hello,everyone.Very glad to be here.My name is Wang Chang,and i am 13 years old.Now i am a student. My favorite subject is Chinese, because(引导原因状语从句，最好不要独立成句） it is very interesting.But i don't like P.E, because it is too tired (to have P.E class不是“体育课累”，是你自己做这件事累）. My favorite star is Zhang Jie.Because he worked（改为works因为张杰没有死） very hard. I like animals.My favorite animais are cats, because they are cute.This is me.Thank you for listening.
文中几处都用了because，我都稍作了修改，原因一样，就不一一指出了
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