请帮忙修改一篇英文Email!Dear.Jaki.Hello.This is Heather.Maybe you can't remember me.So...I will introduce myself first~I'm Heather.From Class 99.My English is not very good ,also not bad(I think).Love basketball ,but no 【Clutch the Bear】

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Dear.Jaki.
Hello.
This is Heather.Maybe you can't remember me.So...I will introduce myself first~
I'm Heather.From Class 99.My English is not very good ,also not bad(I think).Love basketball ,but no 【Clutch the Bear】>A
我是初中生..初一的学生..= =

Dear.Jaki.
Hello.
This is Heather.Maybe you had forgotten aboutme.Soi will introduce myself.
I'm Heather.From Class 99.My English is good nor bad.Love basketball ,but no 【Clutch the Bear】>A

一开始没怎么看后面的 前面帮你改了两句 越看越不对 我就想问你个问题 你写的什么狗屁东西啊 CHINGLISH都谈不上了 完全看不懂 你到底想表达什么意思 我怎么感觉你中文思路都不清楚 的 你干脆把你想表达的中文说一遍 我帮你写篇吧 真受不了 你初中生？...

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一开始没怎么看后面的 前面帮你改了两句 越看越不对 我就想问你个问题 你写的什么狗屁东西啊 CHINGLISH都谈不上了 完全看不懂 你到底想表达什么意思 我怎么感觉你中文思路都不清楚 的 你干脆把你想表达的中文说一遍 我帮你写篇吧 真受不了 你初中生？

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Dear.Jaki.
Hello.
This is Heather. Maybe you don't remember me. So... I will introduce myself first~
I'm Heather. From Class 99. My English is not good ,also not bad(I think).I Lov...

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Dear.Jaki.
Hello.
This is Heather. Maybe you don't remember me. So... I will introduce myself first~
I'm Heather. From Class 99. My English is not good ,also not bad(I think).I Love basketball ,but no 【Clutch the Bear】>A<
Yesterday I‘m busy with making an good impression on you(my English teacher said:make an impression on someone is important). But I don't know whether it is an good impression。Tell me please~ .
I'm really very surprised about the "telephone" problem that we talked. Could you remember it? Beacause headmaster Mr.Liu told us American students can't bring telephone to school, Or they'll face a big trouble. did you know two chinese sentences? "天下的乌鸦一般黑"and"英雄所见略同". Means "Crows are black all over the world"and"heroes have similar views".Which one do you think better? I think is "heroes have similar views"HAHA~
About hockey I just know a little . MLB and NFL. I can't see NFL in china. but I saw some MLB in china.I knowd Philadelphia Phillies won last year. But I didn't see the match. Which team do you like best? Can you tell me something about it? If you can , Thanks a lot~
Eh..
Write soon~
yours Heather.

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改好了。大写的都是改的部分。完全按照你想表达的意思。呵呵 放心的发去邮件吧。相信不久你的水平会大幅提高的。加油
Dear.Jaki.
Hello.
This is Heather. Maybe you can't remember me. So... I will introduce myself first~
I'm Heather. From Cl...

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改好了。大写的都是改的部分。完全按照你想表达的意思。呵呵 放心的发去邮件吧。相信不久你的水平会大幅提高的。加油
Dear.Jaki.
Hello.
This is Heather. Maybe you can't remember me. So... I will introduce myself first~
I'm Heather. From Class 99. My English is not very good NOR VERY bad(I think). Love basketball ,but noT GOOD AT IT 【Clutch the Bear】>A<
Yesterday I WAS busy LEAVING AN impression on you(Our English teacher said:LEAVE AN impression on people is an successful job!). But I don't know IF It is A good or bad ONE. Tell me please~ Don't CHEAT ME~
About CELLPHONE that we talked ABOUT. DO you remember it ? I'm really very surprised AT THE DIFFERENCE BETWEEN American school and Chinese school. Beacause MY headmaster Mr.Liu told us American students can't bring CELLPHONE to school, Or they'll HAVE trouble. Do you know THE two chinese saying? "天下的乌鸦一般黑"and"英雄所见略同".THEY Mean "Crows are black all over the world"and"heroes have similar views".Which one do you think IS SUITABLE FOR American students and Chinese students? I think IT SHOULD BE "heroes have similar views"HAHA~
About hockey I just know a little . MLB and NFL. I can't WATCH NFL in china. So I WATCH some MLB in china.I knEW Philadelphia Phillies WON last year. But I didn't see it. Which team do you like BETTER? ? If POSSIBLE, Can you tell me something about it?Thanks a lot~
Eh..
I AM LOOKING FORWARD TO YOUR REPLY
LOVE
Heather.

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