求检查下这篇汉译英有没错我最难忘的经历是在派出所当见习警察的日子,我的主要工作是负责管理我们小镇居民的档案、接待报警.我发现需要警察做的事情真的很多,因为人们都记得有事找

求检查下这篇汉译英有没错
我最难忘的经历是在派出所当见习警察的日子,我的主要工作是负责管理我们小镇居民的档案、接待报警.我发现需要警察做的事情真的很多,因为人们都记得有事找警察.我还曾经接待过一个报警：一个年轻人忘他的卧室钥匙在里面,让我们帮忙打开!虽然事情很多很杂,但我因此改掉了很多毛病,使我变得更细心.
My most unforgettable go through is day serving as the police who is on probation in local police station ,that my main part works is to be in charge of the file managing our small town resident's ,to receive warning.I am discovered requiring that the thing that the police does is true many,have something to look for the police because of people all keeps in memory.I had once received a warning:One young person is forgot his bedroom key is inside ,is opened up by our help!Though thing that many have been very miscellaneous,but I have given up many trouble therefore,makes me become more careful.

My most memorable experiences in the police station when the student days,my main job is responsible for the management of our residents in the town of files,the police received.I found that the police need to do a lot of really,because people will recall that the police find something.I have also received a warning:a young man forgot his keys inside the bedroom,let us help to open!Although many miscellaneous things,but I give up a lot of problems,I have become more careful.

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go through ，不能是名词
unforgettable experiences of mine 较地道
of our resident‘s files in the town
receiving police
I found what the police need to do really a lot
真是的，都是错，写得文章看不下去了。

你这个是你自己用翻译机器的吧，我刚好有空，帮你翻译一下吧
The days when I served as a police on probation in the local station is my most unforgettable experience.During that time, my main task was to manage the files of the ...

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你这个是你自己用翻译机器的吧，我刚好有空，帮你翻译一下吧
The days when I served as a police on probation in the local station is my most unforgettable experience.During that time, my main task was to manage the files of the residents in our town and the reception.Because people all remembered to go to the police for help in emergency,there were really a lot of things to do for a policeman.I still remember that there was one young man,who locked the door and forgot to take the bedroom key out,asking me for help!Although these are only trivial things,they did make me get rid of many bad habits and be a more careful person.

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