求一篇英语作文,写六一儿童节的从现在的儿童节谈到现在儿童的学业繁忙,再到儿童的安全问题（社会上有虐杀儿童及儿童落水等问题）,再写这种情况下儿童的成长问题,呼吁社会给儿童以关

求一篇英语作文,写六一儿童节的
从现在的儿童节谈到现在儿童的学业繁忙,再到儿童的安全问题（社会上有虐杀儿童及儿童落水等问题）,再写这种情况下儿童的成长问题,呼吁社会给儿童以关注
字太少了吧，至少120吧，好的在加50

Children's day is coming soon,all the children are very happy.But now all the children have too much homewoke to do.They hardly have space time to play with thire friends.
Now many of the social problems are threatened the life and health of children.Such as traffic accidents,drowning（溺水） and violent behavior(暴力行为）.
It is everyone's duty to protect children.
Let the whole society to protect children grow healthily.
我的神啊,我自己写的.应该没有语法上的错误.借鉴一下吧.

Children's day is coming soon，all the children are very happy。But now all the children have too much homewoke to do.They hardly have space time to play with thire friends.
Now many of the social ...

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Children's day is coming soon，all the children are very happy。But now all the children have too much homewoke to do.They hardly have space time to play with thire friends.
Now many of the social problems are threatened the life and health of children.Such as traffic accidents,drowning and violent behavior。
It is everyone's duty to protect children.
Let the whole society to protect children grow healthily.

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我哪会！我只不过才是一初中生！

Children's Day of Mine
Yesterday was Children's Day.I was very happy.
My parents gave many presents to me,such as chocolates and toys,so I had a good time.To my happiness,my aunt was coming t...

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Children's Day of Mine
Yesterday was Children's Day.I was very happy.
My parents gave many presents to me,such as chocolates and toys,so I had a good time.To my happiness,my aunt was coming to see me.She spoke highly of me and I very pleased with it. Children's Day was my own day,so I decided to make it full.I wished I could have Children's Day

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A national holiday, I go out shopping and dad and mom.真热闹street, Yangko teams played a lively twist Yangko, Wai full circle and a circle of people everywhere permeated with an atmosphere of jubilation...

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A national holiday, I go out shopping and dad and mom.真热闹street, Yangko teams played a lively twist Yangko, Wai full circle and a circle of people everywhere permeated with an atmosphere of jubilation. The streets coming and going, and usually a lot more compared to the folks in the village, they came to the county took advantage of the holidays, look at the excitement, go to shops, to see if I can choose a satisfactory products, the competitiveness of the various shops is also very intense, the owner had to employ their own "unique trick," while clapping while some shout, some printed leaflets to many fat, as well as the owner picked up the microphone simply selling ... ... ..
Mom and Dad and I walked into a mobile phone shop, I saw a grandfather wearing the old uniforms around the counter, I would like: Maybe his sons and daughters in the field, I would like to contact people when there is no tool, so called money elderly people buy their own cell phones now. Farming may be the grandfather own money, thinking: people out fashion, I have to buy a mobile phone in time for fashion now. I want to: It is not grandpa's retirement on their own wages to buy, or to facilitate the future with an old friend call ... ....
Well now the policy, people's lives is a kind of one-year, three major changed it! I believe that we will become more and more prosperous life.

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