英语翻译但是,上海地铁的行车安全管理规范和自动控制系统并没有能够防止地铁列车相撞事故的发生.早在2011年7月28日晚,上海地铁10号线就曾经开错方向,引起舆论哗然.但是此次事故并未造

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但是,上海地铁的行车安全管理规范和自动控制系统并没有能够防止地铁列车相撞事故的发生.早在2011年7月28日晚,上海地铁10号线就曾经开错方向,引起舆论哗然.但是此次事故并未造成人员伤亡,媒体也就没有进一步的追究.不过9月27日的地铁相撞,终于给我们敲了一记醒钟：原来我们的管理和技术并不是那么的完美.
However,the shanghai metro traffic safety management standards and automatic control system could not enable to prevent the subway train rear-end accident.Shanghai metro line 10 has once gone the wrong direction and caused the public opinion which is setting with indignation early in the evening of july 28,2011.but nobody injured or died in that accident,so the media didn’t look into it further.However,the subway collision finally give us an alarming :turn out that our management and technology is not that perfect.

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alarming应该用warning
turn out that our management and technology is not that perfect.改为
it was turned out that our management and technology is not so perfect as expected

这是你原文的翻译给你抄 But, Shanghai metro train operation safety management standard and automatic control system was not able to prevent the subway train accident...

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这是你原文的翻译给你抄 But, Shanghai metro train operation safety management standard and automatic control system was not able to prevent the subway train accident happening. In early July 28, 2011 late, Shanghai subway line 10 once opened direction, cause public outcry. But the accident didn't cause casualties, the media have no further investigated. But September 27, subway collided, finally we knocked on a record to wake up the clock: originally we management and technology is not so perfect.

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However, shanghai metro safety management regulations and automatic control system failed to prevent the the collision from happening. As a matter of fact, Shanghai subway line 10 had once gone the wr...

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However, shanghai metro safety management regulations and automatic control system failed to prevent the the collision from happening. As a matter of fact, Shanghai subway line 10 had once gone the wrong direction in the evening of july 28th,2011 and surprised public opinion, but the incident attracted not much attention from the media since nobody injured then. But this time it awaked all of us with alarm that the management and technology are not that perfect.

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However, the shanghai metro traffic safety management standards and automatic control system 【wasn't able】 to prevent the subway train rear-end accident. 【Autually, as early as in the evening of july ...

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However, the shanghai metro traffic safety management standards and automatic control system 【wasn't able】 to prevent the subway train rear-end accident. 【Autually, as early as in the evening of july 28,2011】，Shanghai metro line 10 【once went】 the wrong direction and caused 【a public outcry】.【Fortunately】, nobody 【was】 injured or died in that accident, so the media didn’t look into it further. However, the subway collision on September, 27 finally warns us that our management and technology is not that perfect.

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However, the operation safety management regulations and automatic control system of subway in Shanghai still could not prevent the subway accident. As early as the night of July 28, 2011, Shanghai me...

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However, the operation safety management regulations and automatic control system of subway in Shanghai still could not prevent the subway accident. As early as the night of July 28, 2011, Shanghai metro line 10 had once gone the wrong direction and caused the public opinion which is setting with indignation. Luckily , nobody got hurt or lost life. So the media didn't look into it further. But, the collision happened on Sept.27 gave us an alarming once again: it turns out that the management and technology is not that perfect.

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