请各路英语达人帮我看看我的英语翻译有没问题,无限感激中国泥人博物馆位于无锡惠山古镇,距离无锡市区中心1.4 公里.建造在原无锡市惠山泥人厂的旧址之上,建筑面积12000平方米,展陈面积80

请各路英语达人帮我看看我的英语翻译有没问题,无限感激
中国泥人博物馆位于无锡惠山古镇,距离无锡市区中心1.4 公里.建造在原无锡市惠山泥人厂的旧址之上,建筑面积12000平方米,展陈面积8000平方米.建筑形制由日本著名建筑师隈研吾设计,空中鸟瞰如同一个字母U.整个博物馆建筑保持了江南水乡传统建筑造型特色.博物馆内由大厅、序厅、中国泥塑历史渊源厅、中国各泥人流派厅、无锡惠山泥人厅、名家名作鉴赏厅等空间组成并收藏了来自北京、天津、河北、陕西、山西等13个国内泥人之乡各个时期最具代表性的精品泥人.游客们可以近距离的欣赏感受大师们的艺术作品和精湛技艺.

China Clay Figurine Museum is located in Wuxi Huishan Ancient Town 1.4 kilometers away from the center of the town.
Built on the former location of Wuxi Huishan Clay Figurine Factory, the two-storey museum covers a floor area of 12000 sqm , among which the total exhibition area is 8000 sqm . The architectural appearance was built from the design of a famous Japanese architect Kengo Kuma. A bird's eye view from the air, as if it were a letter U. The whole architecture maintains the original feature of traditional architectures in the south of the Yangtze River . The whole museum consists of the hall, the preface hall, the historical roots of the Chinese clay sculpture exhibition hall, Chinese schools of the clay figurine exhibition hall, Wuxi Huishan clay figurine exhibition hall and the masters and masterpieces exhibition hall. It has collected exquisite clay figurines of various periods from domestic 13 most representative hometowns of the clay figurine, including Beijing, Tianjing, Hebei, Shaanxi, Shanxi , etc. Travelers can closely appreciate the astonishing works from those masters.

The China clay figurine museum is located in Wuxi Huishan ancient town,and 1.4 kilometers from Wuxi city center.Built above the former site of Wuxi Huishan clay figurines plant construction area of 12,000 square meters,showcasing an area of 8,000 square meters.Architectural form designed by the famous Japanese architect Kengo Kuma,bird's eye view like a letter U.The entire museum building to maintain the the Jiangnan traditional architectural styling features.Hall,Office of sequence,Chinese clay sculpture historical origins Hall,China Office of clay figurines genre,Wuxi Huishan Clay Hall,famous writers Appreciation Hall space museum collections from Beijing,Tianjin,Hebei,Shaanxi,Shanxi,13 domestic most representative of the fine clay figurines of clay figurines hometown of each period.Visitors can close to appreciate the feelings of the masters of art and craft.
额,看看这个吧.你看哈哪个更好点.我也只是给你个建议.

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China Clay Figurine Museum is located in Wuxi Huishan Ancient Town 1.4 kilometers away from the center of the town.
中国泥人博物馆座落于无锡惠山古镇1.4公里远的城镇的中心。
Built on the former location of Wuxi Huishan...

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China Clay Figurine Museum is located in Wuxi Huishan Ancient Town 1.4 kilometers away from the center of the town.
中国泥人博物馆座落于无锡惠山古镇1.4公里远的城镇的中心。
Built on the former location of Wuxi Huishan Clay Figurine Factory, the two-storey museum covers a floor area of 12000 sqm , among which the total exhibition area is 8000 sqm .
建立在前者的位置——惠山泥人工厂无锡,两层楼的博物馆建筑面积覆盖了12000平方米,其中总展览面积是8000平方米。
The architectural appearance was built from the design of a famous Japanese architect Kengo Kuma.
建筑外观设计是建立在一个著名的日本建筑师Kuma一。
A bird's eye view from the air, as if it were a letter U. The whole architecture maintains the original feature of traditional architectures in the south of the Yangtze River .
一个鸟瞰从空中,仿佛它是一个字母,整个架构保持原貌的传统建筑在长江以南。
The whole museum consists of the hall, the preface hall, the historical roots of the Chinese clay sculpture exhibition hall, Chinese schools of the clay figurine exhibition hall, Wuxi Huishan clay figurine exhibition hall and the masters and masterpieces exhibition hall.
整个博物馆由大厅,大厅的序言,历史根源的中国泥塑展览大厅,中国学校的泥人展览大厅,无锡惠山泥人展厅,展厅的大师和杰作。
It has collected exquisite clay figurines of various periods from domestic 13 most representative hometowns of the clay figurine, including Beijing, Tianjing, Hebei, Shaanxi, Shanxi , etc. Travelers can closely appreciate the astonishing works from those masters
它收集了精致的粘土雕像不同时期从国内13最有代表性的家乡泥塑,包括北京、天津、河北、陕西、山西等。游客可以欣赏惊人的工作密切从那些大师

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中国泥人博物馆位于无锡惠山古镇1.4公里，距镇中心。
建立在前位置无锡惠山泥人厂，两层楼博物馆占地面积12000平方米，其中展览总面积为8000平方米。建筑外观的设计建造了著名的日本建筑师隈研吾。一个从空中俯瞰，好像它是一个字母。整个建筑保持了原有的特征的传统建筑在长江以南。整个博物馆由序言大厅，大厅的历史根源，中国泥塑展览馆，中国学校泥人的展览馆，无锡惠山泥人的展厅和名家名作展览厅。它收...

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中国泥人博物馆位于无锡惠山古镇1.4公里，距镇中心。
建立在前位置无锡惠山泥人厂，两层楼博物馆占地面积12000平方米，其中展览总面积为8000平方米。建筑外观的设计建造了著名的日本建筑师隈研吾。一个从空中俯瞰，好像它是一个字母。整个建筑保持了原有的特征的传统建筑在长江以南。整个博物馆由序言大厅，大厅的历史根源，中国泥塑展览馆，中国学校泥人的展览馆，无锡惠山泥人的展厅和名家名作展览厅。它收集了精美的泥塑的各个时期的国内最具代表性的13故乡的泥人，包括北京，天津，河北，陕西，山西，等。游客可以密切惊艳从这些作品的主人。

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