一句话求鉴定对错,i spend my some time to visit with some winners often about their unforgetable things and learning experience

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一句话求鉴定对错,
i spend my some time to visit with some winners often about their unforgetable things and learning experience

这句话有好几个地方表达不当,分别为:
1、often的位置;
2、spend (time) doing,花时间做某事;
3、visit是及物动词,不用介词with,但建议改为interview(采访),介词about改为for;
整句修改:I often spend some time interviewing some winners for their unforgetable things and learning experience.

i spend 【去掉my】 some time 【to visit :spend sometime on sth./ in doing sth., 所以改成 in visiting】 【去掉with】 some winners often 【about改成 on】 their unforgetable things and learning experience
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i spend 【去掉my】 some time 【to visit :spend sometime on sth./ in doing sth., 所以改成 in visiting】 【去掉with】 some winners often 【about改成 on】 their unforgetable things and learning experience
整理一下:
i spend some time in visiting some winners often on their unforgetable things and learning experience

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I spend some time to visit the winners, and ask them about their unforgettable things and learning experience.