一篇英语作业.同学更重要还是父母更重要.据说是托福作文,70词左右.

一篇英语作业.同学更重要还是父母更重要.据说是托福作文,
70词左右.

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Although the influence of classmates is very important,a child’s success in school depends mainly on the influence of the parents.
In general,the example set by the parents is the basis for the behavior and attitudes of the child.If the parents show an interest in learning,are supportive,loving,encouraging and have made it clear that education is important by reading to them,praising their progress and not being overly critical when they do not achieve maximum success,the child will probably be confident,relaxed,enjoy learning,and not be afraid of making mistakes as they try to be more creative in their thinking and studies in the classroom amidst all kind of classmates.Because of their confidence and feeling of security given by their parents,they will be happy,well adjusted students and popular with their classmates and the teachers,and better students.
If the child knows that,no matter what,their parents are loving and encouraging and that they always have a “safe” base to return to,there is little that can really upset them at school and they will be able to attend to their studies successfully even in the face of bullies,naughty,distracting classmates or even unskilled and overly critical teachers.No matter what the classmates or the teacher say or do,the child has the sure knowledge that their parent love and “approve” of them; so,they are not seriously bothered by negative aspects at school.
On the contrary,if the parents are critical,unsupportive,unloving,there is little that classmates or teachers can or will do that will be of much help because the core being of the child is “in trouble” and that child does not have the basic confidence that only parents love and support can instill in them.
Clearly,the influence of the parents is much more critical to a child’s success in school than the classmates.
译文：
虽然同学们的影响是非常重要的,孩子在学校的成功主要取决于父母的影响.
在一般情况下,由家长树立的榜样,是孩子的行为和态度的基础.如果父母学习兴趣,有支持,有爱心,鼓励并已经说得很清楚,给他们读故事,称赞他们的进步,而不是过于挑剔时,他们没有达到最大的成功,教育是重要的,孩子可能会自信,轻松,享受学习,不要怕犯错误,因为他们试图更具创造性,他们的思维和研究各类同学在教室之中.因为他们的信心,他们的父母给予的安全的感觉,他们会很高兴,调整好学生与同学和老师,以及更好的学生和流行.
如果孩子知道,不管是什么,他们的父母在爱和鼓励,他们总是有一个“安全”基地返回到,很少有真正能够打乱他们在学校,他们将能够参加他们的研究成功,即使在面对恶霸,顽皮的,分散的同学或即便是不熟练的,过于挑剔的教师.无论什么样的同学或老师说或做,孩子有确信,他们的父母的爱和“批准”他们这样,他们没有认真在学校的消极方面的困扰.
相反,如果父母是至关重要的,不予支持,没有爱心,有小同学或老师可以做,这将有很大帮助,因为孩子的核心是“麻烦”,那孩子不具备可以向他们灌输基本的信心,只有父母的爱和支持.
显然,父母的影响,更重要的是孩子的比同学们在学校的成功.