请高手帮我看看这封信中,有什么地方是错误的?Dear comrade:Hello.I’m glad to write to you,how are you?I’m live with my mother and my father.I love my parents.You look handsome young!I think you are bright,energetic with strong car
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请高手帮我看看这封信中,有什么地方是错误的?
Dear comrade:
Hello.
I’m glad to write to you,how are you?
I’m live with my mother and my father.I love my parents.
You look handsome young!I think you are bright,energetic with strong career-ambition.
I don’t like takeing photo,but I will give you mine.can you guess which is me in the photo?
My telephoto number is 123456.Tell me your telephoto,please!
As a Chinese,English is difficult to learn,include grammar,tenses,pronunciation,all of these are difficult.Nowadays,English is very importance in this world,it's a international language,so we must keep to learn it.
I'm a poor guy on English.I'm a lazy girl to learn English,i'm only watch about English TV and listen to English music just for fun.我都快忍不住要和你说汉语了,呵呵!
Awaiting to hear from you soonest.
Your friend:Mary
I’m live with my mother and my father.I love my parents.
改为:i live with my parents and i love them.
I don’t like takeing photo,but I will give you mine.can you guess which is me in the photo?
改为:i don't like taking photoes,but I'd like to give you one,can you find me in the photo
English is very importance in this world
改为:is important in the world,
i'm only watch about English TV and listen to English music just for fun.
改为:I only watch……
只能这样了,除非整个重写.
最后一句话格式错误!!