I will take good care of my father when I grow up to thank the things he has done for me这样写通吗 不通怎么改呢

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I will take good care of my father when I grow up to thank the things he has done for me
这样写通吗 不通怎么改呢

I will take good care of my father when I grow up to thank him for the things he has done for me

挺好的。

最好改为:I will take good care of my father when I grow up to thank him for the things he has done for me .