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　　2014年3月3日 星期一 阴

　　又模模糊糊过了一周了，新的一天又开始了。望着阴沉沉的天空，心情莫名的变得沉重起来，宛如承载着岁月的沉重。走出教室，静静望着远方，思绪飘飞。往事历历在目，深深刻在我脑里的名字浮现于心头，默默地念着：荣基已经开学一周了，你有没有好好学习，你会想我么？好好学习，不要辜负我对你的期盼哦，我也会好好学习的。凉凉的风徐徐的吹过，把我带回了现实世界。一声清脆的铃声大断了我的思路，黄蓉走过来说：“走吧，上课了”我们悠悠的走回教室。

    初二:黄莹莹

篇一：浅思作文难问题

浅思作文难问题

在作文教学领域中，教师指导为之头痛，学生写作为之害怕，分析其原因可由两个方面来看：其一，老师对学生的要求过高过细。未能从学生的年龄特点和心理特征出发，而是由成人的角度，要求学生写出“有意义的”、“有趣的”的事，并向学生提出要写出多少字或者是有个漂亮的开头结尾等等对学生过高的要求；其次是指导写作过细，一上作文指导课就拿着一两篇优秀作文作为例文，怎么开头，怎么结尾，过程应该如何的具体都作了一一的详细指导，在这里，不由得发出一个质疑，这样的习作会是“优秀”的吗？学生在这种指导课教育下，只能是一件同一个模套出来的产品，没创造性没独立性可言。其二，学生的生活材料积累肤浅，学生习作举笔艰难。现在的“小公主”、“小皇帝”在电脑信息时代发展迅速的今天，看书对于他们的吸引力更逊了，胸无点墨，又岂能妙笔生花？

要解决以上的问题我们只要抓住兴趣这位好老师就行了，至于怎么发挥好兴趣的作用呢，以下来谈谈我在实践中的一些体会。

《语言课程标准》对作文的要求可从它对作文的称呼了解，低年级的叫“写话”，中高年级的叫“习作”，强调小学生要“对写话有兴趣”，“注意表现自己觉得新奇有趣的或印象最深，最受感动的内容”，要求老师要“为学生的自主写作提供有利条件和广阔空间，减少对学生写作的束缚，鼓励自由表达和有创意的表达”。

一、丰富生活

著名的教育家叶圣陶先生说：“生活犹如源泉，文章犹如溪水，源泉丰富而不枯竭，溪水自然活泼流之不尽。”因此我们应该多指导学生在实践中丰富生命，积累生活的小点滴。

１．鼓励学生多参加力所能及的家务劳动，在参与劳动的同时，感受父母的辛劳，体验劳动的乐趣。

现在大部分的学生都是独生子女，在家时，他们就是家长手中的宝贝，动手做家务事机会是少之又少。为此，我们可以针对他们的年龄特点选择一些适合他们做的家务劳动，使他们在写《记一次家务》时有内容可写。例如，上课前，我先让他们回家练习一下，并要求家长给学生作一些恰当的指导，上课时，我先请１－２个同学上来做一做他们会做的家务（教室有条件可以实现的劳动），如清洁地板，边做边说说自己是如何清洁的，与此同时，老师对其叙述的顺序进行适当的引导；然后再请１－２同学说说自己会做的家务事，如炒一碟好菜等等。在这类的家务劳动中，拉近了父母与子女之间的距离，在课间养成他们热爱劳动的情感。同时，最基本的解决了学生言之无物的问题。

２．社会实践活动形式多样，让学生的课余生活充实。

著名作家孙梨说过：“作家不是教室里培养出来的。”我们就联系生活实际有意识地开展一些有意义的活动，种花栽树，参观浏览。为贫困山区的小朋友捐物捐款奉献爱心，替邻近的老人做一些力所能及的事情，学会安排自己的假期生活等等。

二、增加阅读的信息量

生活是有限的，知识是无限的。学生们的生活圈不大，实践性太少，更丰富的知识是蕴含在广泛的阅读当中的。我们在语文教学中应更重视引导学生多读书，志好书，通过大量阅读丰富词汇，获得间接经验，为习作积累丰富的语言材料。

１．按学生兴趣喜好，及时向学生推荐一些图文并茂、情节生动，并有利于他们身心健康成长的书籍。如：《百家作文指导》、《一千零一夜》、《天方夜谭》等等。

２．做好读书笔记，积累写作经验。苏霍姆林斯基说过：“应该把读书笔记作为作文教学的重要内容之一。建立在大量阅读基础上的读书笔记，既是学生对所读读物产生感受和认识的文字记录。也是一种表达能力的训练。”因此，我们应就如何做好笔记进行有效的指导，虽然现在有《好词好句》这一类的书，但我认为只有教育学生通过自己的脑袋思考并亲手写

下来的读书笔记的功效才来得实际有成效，同时，利用班会或晨读午读的时间让同学们都把自己的好词好句读出来，跟其他人分享他们的理解感想，这不失为一个很好的相互学习的机会。

三、也让学生当中习作的主人

生活的颜色是彩色，不同的人，他的生活就会有所不同，我们要尊重学生的个性的同时，就创造一个轻松愉快的习作环境。

１．拓展写作空间先拓宽作文范围

学生怕写作文的其中一个原因是由于未下笔就对题目及要求有所惧怕。所以我们老师在拟定题目的时候就尽量与学生的生活，让他们找到生活的源泉，让他们有话可说。如我在拟定《ＸＸＸ，我想对你说》为题目时，给了学生一个说话的自由空间，爸妈、爷爷奶奶、熟悉的邻居小伙伴、陌生的邮递员叔叔、经常跟着自己的那一条不知名的小狗，都是他们很好的倾诉对象。

２．创设良好的相互学习环境

要提高习作水平，必须要学会如何修改文章，教师修改作文难免会修改得过多，要求也过高，学生看了自己用心写出来的一篇“杰作”被改得体无完肤，时间长了，很容易就对写作文失去了信心，适得其反。所以我在三年级的习作课上，先让学生修改自己的文章，再分小组讨论修改情况，鼓励学生反复改，多接受不同的意见，并且在总体评价方面我以鼓励表扬为主，令到学生有信心也有兴趣写好作文。如果学生逐渐养成一个我想写，我喜欢写的思想意识的话，相信作文难这个问题就不复存在了。

篇二：aaxpnpj雅_思作文完美打印版

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一个人总要走陌生的路，看陌生的风景，听陌生的歌，然后在某个不经意的瞬间，你会发现，原本费尽心机想要忘记的事情真的就这么忘记了..

雅思图表作文总结

(I)数据图：

一、介绍段introduction：

介绍段内容几乎完全不用创新，就是对题目文字部分的

(2)增加/减少：动词

increase / decrease, rise/drop(可做名词) go up / come down climb / slide ascend / decline

rocket / collapse(暴增/暴减)

过去的图表用一般过去时；一天24小时的图表用一般现在时。

(3)升降速度/幅度(去掉-ly就是形容词) 快：quickly / rapidly / swiftly 慢：slowly / gradually / steadily

大：greatly / vastly / considerably / substantially 小：slightly / marginally / minutely 数字副词：

简单线图 about / around / roughly / more or less 12 million

简单线图：

(3)+(2a)增加/减少：名词 趋势(包括升降速度)：

a sharp / slow / great / slight increase The visits increased quickly from about 12 to 53 million from 1979 to an upward / rising / increasing tendency 1999. a downward / falling / decreasing trend (1) (2) (3) (4) (5) (4)数字单位用单数 There was an increase in the visits from about 12 to 53 million from 12 million而不是12 millions 1979 to 1999. (5)时间：

(2a) (1) (4) (5) from … to … / between … and … An increase in the visits is seen from about 12 to 53 million from 1979 during the period from … to … / between … and … / starting from …. to 1999. (6) (2a) (1) (6) (4) (5) show / prove / witness (1)主体：(

复杂线图

极值：

峰值：peak (v. &

n.), summit (v. &

n.), highest point 谷值：touch the bottom (v.), nadir (n.), lowest point

稳定时期：plateau (n.高原), lower stationary phase (低稳时期) A possible answer: (Band 6.5)

According to the curve chart, daily electricity need is higher in winter (38,000 units on average) than in summer (18,000 units on average). In winter, electricity consumption

peaks at 2:00 am and 10:00 pm while it touches the bottom at 0:00 am and 8:00 am. On the other hand, in summer, it summits at 2:00 pm and 11:00 pm, but has a nadir at 9:00 am and a lower stationary phase from 4:00 pm to 9:00 pm.

简单柱图

简单柱图：

A possible answer: (Band 6.5)

The bar graph demonstrates that the most UK visitors went to France and Spain, which were 11.0 and 9.5 million. Also, many British travelers were attracted by the USA (4.0 million), Greece (3.5 million) and Turkey (2.0 million).

复杂柱图

复杂柱图：

比较：

90% of those who held a skilled vocational diploma were men, compared with only 10% of women.

More women held undergraduate diplomas (70%) and

marginally more women reached degree level (55%).

Men with postgraduate diplomas clearly outnumbered their female counterparts (70% and 30% respectively).(摘自《剑桥雅思4》) 饼图：无非是两个表达的组合“占”和百分比。

饼图

“占”：

Occupy

Be shared by Account for

Be responsible for Be in charge of Be in the charge of 百分比:

A small percentage of … (X%) A quarter of …

The minority of … (X%)(小部分) Half of …

The majority of … (X%)

Most of … (X%)

One-fifth of …

A possible answer: (Band 6.5)

The pie graph demonstrates that heating rooms and water occupies the majority of electricity consumption (52.5%). Then, 17.5% of the electricity demand is shared by ovens, kettles and washing machines. Lighting, TV, radio and vacuum cleaners, food mixers, electric tools are responsible for the rest, with 15% each.

表格

表格：

数字引入：图表引用数字的三种主要方法 分词短语：

On average, 11% of all households, comprising almost two million people, were in this position. 括号：

Couples generally tended to be better off, with lower poverty levels for couples without children (7%) than those with children (12%). 介词短语：

However, those consisting of only one parent or a single adult had almost double this proportion of poor people, with 21% and 19% respectively. 词数填充Word filler ：这些表达没有实际意义，考试的时候可以填充词数。

It is noticeable that … It is easy to see that … It is obvious that …

三、比较段comparison / 结论段conclusion：

比较段：内容无非是数据关联或者特征关联两种可能。

What is also worth mentioning is that … if the two diagrams are considered as a whole.

A possible answer: (Band 6.5)

What is also worth mentioning is that almost 40% UK tourists selected France and Spain in 1999, if the two diagrams are considered as a whole. 单图结论段：

Overall, the table/chart/graph/diagram suggests that … A possible answer: (Band 6.5)

Overall, the table suggests that households of single adults and those with children were more likely to be living in poverty than those consisting of couples.(摘自《剑桥雅思4》) (II)

流程图/示意图/地图 介绍段：

The flow chart / diagram / map illustrates … The whole procedure can be divided into … stages. 主体段：

一般过渡：时间、顺序、目的

时间：to begin with, next, then, later, finally;

at the same time / simultaneously

顺序：the first stage involves … / in the second stage / in the third stage / in the last stage

目的：in order to / in order that;

so as to / so that

图表作文

According to the diagram, the first step of obtaining water outdoors is to find a hole with green plants on the bottom. Next, remove the green plants on the middle of the bottom and put a container there. Then, cover the hole with a plastic sheet and place some stones on the edge of it to secure its position. Finally, a third stone is laid on the middle of the plastic sheet so that the middle part is also the lowest part.(摘自《雅思写作胜经》) 特殊过渡：状语从句when, where...

When the sun shines on the green plants in the hole, water evaporates from these plants. The vapor rises up and then cools down to form water drops under the plastic sheet. When there is more and more water, it flows along the sheet to accumulate under the lowest part. Finally, water falls down into the container directly under the middle stone.(摘自《雅思写作胜经》，群言出版社)

词语多样化：

accumulate / gather / collect / obtain

词语具体化：

水蒸气vapor和蒸发evaporate这样的词并不容易，考试的时候可以用具体的方式加以规避：

The water turns into gas, rises and finally turns into liquid again and gathers under the sheet of plastic.

句式：

客观描述，多用一般现在时和被动语态。

另转BEC高级写作感想：

阅读结束马上迎来了写作部分。和阅读相比，写作的感觉没那么催命了。PART ONE是图标描述。这次图表考的是线性图(line chart)。一家软件公司在四年间三种人员数量的变化：

篇三：aawdffy雅_思作文75分

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一个人总要走陌生的路，看陌生的风景，听陌生的歌，然后在某个不经意的瞬间，你会发现，原本费尽心机想要忘记的事情真的就这么忘记了..

雅思作文7.5分，就说说作文好了~~心得+好句，哈~ 来源：

?张小艺?的日志 我用的雅思材料（供参考）:

1 听力：（8分）

1 剑4—7：我把真题的听力听写了两遍。

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这个蓝的 还有十天突破雅思写作

4 口语

十天突破雅思口语

写作7.5分心得：

大作文的写作最重要，但是小作文也很重要，不能一直放的小作文不看，因为小作文如果写的不流畅，老是思考，不能在20分钟内写完，就会严重影响大作文的质量。写作文一定要知道换说法，一个意思同样的说法最好不要出现考试纸后，又要了一张写了一半，还把小作文检查了一遍（真的检查出一个错~哈）。

7 除此之外，我还总结了四种句型，开头句型，写好处的句型，写坏处的句型和解决问题类句型。因为所有的雅思议论文题目基本上都是要讨论一个问题的好

的方面和坏的方面，所以这样的句式要准备几个（不用太多），而且确定自己背的很熟，最好是每篇文章都换的多用，达到用的灵活自如。

好句总结：

1 多用such替换the ,a . 例：Admittedly, such issue ,to some extent,has given rise to a bunch of familiar questions.（模板的

find it impossible to resist the temptation to do ….

22 Needless to say / Indeed ,……（可以放在?a href="http://www.zw2.cn/zhuanti/guanyuwozuowen/" target="_blank" class="keylink">我痪淇罚芎糜门秪） 23 develop an unshakable faith in …

24 have a reputation of ..

25 Nothing can catch them for …

26 make a contribution to (也可作写坏处的句子 the city make its own contri

bution to noise)

27 build bridges between

28 特别的

Improve one’s physical and psychological wellbeing /soundness 身体心理健

康

optimise people’s living standards 提高人们生活水平

eradicate poverty 消除贫困

It’s not A that are important ,but B

Satisfy basic (human) needs 满足要求

Ease the tension and conflicts between alleviate the problem of 消除冲突和

紧张

Be fully aware of the consequences

The impact of （sporting activities） goes far beyond the bounds of (leisure

and recreation.)

3 坏处的句型

1 drive up the crime rate ..

2 widen the gap between A

3 pose a (direct) threat to …

4 stifle creativity

5 diminish individual’s leisure time…

6 spin out of control

7 cause(creat) tension and conflicts between…

8 exert(have) detrimental/negative/adverse influence（impact）upon/on

9 is markly incompatible with…与。。不协调

10 be afflicted with …

11 deprive one of sth

12 sth is the root cause of …

13 be saturated with sth

14 at the expense of ….

15 be confronted with sth

16 run contrary to …

17 erode the national identity

18 pose a dilemma for

19 is an vicious circle

20 hamper (scientific) progress

21 there is a yawning gap between

22 pose a devastating problem

23 the reputation is ruined

24 A is a complete failure

25 Things can go wrong on a big scale

26 sth is always faced with a difficult task /problem

27 It is impossible to

28 have (little) difficulties in doing

29pay the price for (fame)

30 (pollution) is the price we pay for( overpopulated ,over industrialized planet )

31 people seem to fail to take into account the fact that ….好句！！ 32 lead to some unfavorable results

33 sacrifice ….for …

34 There is a major concern over t he world about ….

35 give rise to a bunch of familiar questions

36This is compounded by the fact that …

37 the problem of ( information overloaded ) exacerbated by (the growth …) 38 The problem , however , is complicated by the existence of dozens of ..a

nd by the fact that…..

4 解决问题类

小模板：（经济学人）

1Evidence suggests that a key step is to develop a policy on ….,saying clearly (that..).

2Other policies (such as 。) can be taken to back up the policy .

3 One helpful step is to … ,Another possibility is to improve …. , so that ….

4 It should be an addtion to the policy work ,not a substitute.

5 The more effort put in and wider (the whole school) involvement ,the substantial the results are likely to be .

1 give priority to sth

2 shoulder the responsibility to

3 comply with

4 impose restrictions on..

5 take …into account /consideration

6 should be increasingly focus on…rather than …

7 what will make the most difference is …..The new study makes this point even more starkly

8 There are ways of dealing with the topic through …, …. and …..

Three factors are involved in this change.

新概念3+剑桥好句：

1 Apparently,there is a good deal of truth in this idea./There is an element of truth in both agreements

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