英语作文：1.John's new look 2.My favorite food 3.The people on the beach 4.My job 5.My new pen pal再加上汉语,帮我写出来,多给60

英语作文：1.John's new look 2.My favorite food 3.The people on the beach 4.My job 5.My new pen pal
再加上汉语,
帮我写出来,多给60

John`s new look
Recently when I saw John,I was very surprised.Not only did john grow up,but also change a new hairstyle.John was once fat and dirty.But now,when he has changed a new suit,he has became neat and tidy.And when he become higher,he is not fat anymore.So we are all surprised at John's new look.
最近我见到约翰,我大吃了一惊.约翰不仅长高了而且也换了新的发型.约翰上学期又矮又脏,担但当他现在换了一身的打扮时,他变的又干净又整洁.而且他变高之后,也不显得胖了.所以,我们都对约翰的新外貌感到惊讶.
My favourite food
The fired rice is really delicious.When I go home from school,I am always hungry.At that time I always make fried rice by myself.I often cook it carefully and it is so delicious.It makes me happy.After eating it,I am not hungry any more.Fried rice is my favorite.
炒饭是我的最爱.当我从学校回家时,我常常肚子饿.所以那时,我就会自己做炒饭吃.我经常认真的炒所以炒出来的饭很好吃.我吃完后,就不再会肚子饿了,炒饭是我的最爱.
The people on the beach
I live on the coastal city.So I often go to the seaside.On the beach there are a lot of visitors from all over the world.Some are having a sun shower while others are having a drink.There are also many children in the water.Sometimes they run back to the beach for some drink and sometimes they play with sand.I like the beach so I join in them to play together.
我住在海边,所以我经常去海边.在海滩上,有许多的观光者从世界各地而来.有些人在享受日光浴,有些人在喝饮料.在海上也有许多小孩.有时他们玩水,有时他们玩沙.我热爱沙滩所以我也加入了他们.
My job
Since i was an innocent child,i had the idea to be a doctor in the future.I always see the people died in the TV,i feels frustrated about it.Therefore,a dream to be a doctor came into my mind.I want to be the person who can save people's life just like God Jesus.
既然我还是个小学生,我就希望以后当一名医生.我在电视上常常看到人们死去,每当看到,我都觉得很悲伤.所以,我的梦想失去当一名医生,这样,我就能想耶稣一样去救死扶伤.
My new pen pal
I have a new pen pal.Her name is Sarah.She is 13 years old and she's from France.She can speak English and French.She has a brother,Paul,and a sister,Lucy.She likes going to the movies with her frends.Her favorite subject is geography.
This is my new pen pal.
我的新笔友
我有一个新的笔友.她叫萨拉.她13岁了,她来自法国.她可以讲英语和法语.她有一个弟弟,保罗和一个妹妹,露西.她喜欢和她的朋友去看电影.她最喜欢的科目是地理.
这是我的新笔友.

My new pen pal
I have a new pen pal.Her name is Sarah.She is 13 years old and she's from France.She can speak English and French.She has a brother,Paul,and a sister,Lucy.She likes going to the m...

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My new pen pal
I have a new pen pal.Her name is Sarah.She is 13 years old and she's from France.She can speak English and French.She has a brother,Paul,and a sister,Lucy.She likes going to the movies with her frends.Her favorite subject is geography.
This is my new pen pal.
我的新笔友
我有一个新的笔友.她叫萨拉.她13岁了，她来自法国.她可以讲英语和法语.她有一个弟弟，保罗和一个妹妹，露西.她喜欢和她的朋友去看电影.她最喜欢的科目是地理。
这是我的新笔友。

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John有一个新形象。他不再留长发了。他现在的头发是短的、直的、黑色的。他现在戴了太阳眼睛。他也比过去高了，瘦了。他变得更时尚了。
John has a new image. He is no longer a long hair. He now hair is short, straight, black. He now wears the sun eyes. He also highe...

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John有一个新形象。他不再留长发了。他现在的头发是短的、直的、黑色的。他现在戴了太阳眼睛。他也比过去高了，瘦了。他变得更时尚了。
John has a new image. He is no longer a long hair. He now hair is short, straight, black. He now wears the sun eyes. He also higher than in the past, thin. He became more fashionable.
有许多不同种类的食物。我最喜欢的食物是炒饭。在中国,大部分的人在南方吃米饭。而且我喜欢炒饭最好。
真香。当我从学校回家时,我总是饿了。那时,我总是使炒饭了。我经常做饭,它是仔细很好吃。它使我快乐。餐后,我不饿了。炒饭是我的最爱。
There are many different kinds of food. My favorite food is fried rice.In China, most of the people in the south eat rice. And I like fried rice best.
It’s really delicious. When I go home from school, I am always hungry. At that time I always make fried rice by myself. I often cook it carefully and it is so delicious. It makes me happy. After eating it, I am not hungry any more. Fried rice is my favorite.
每年吸引许多游客美丽的海滩。如果你不能相信,你可以来找。看,在沙滩上有很多来自世界各地的游客。他们中的一些人喝一杯,有些却有一个太阳雨。与此同时,许多孩子们正在城堡沙子。他们所有的人都玩得很开心。
如果你有时间,欢迎你来了海滩。
Each year the beautiful beaches attracts many visitors. If you can't believe, you can come to see. Look, on the beach are a lot of tourists from all over the world. Some of them are having a drink while some are having a sunshower. At the same time, many children are making castles with sand. All of them are having a good time.
If you have time, you are welcome to the beaches.
我有新的笔友,你知道我的新笔友吗?
他有一个短而直乌黑的头发,他个子高,他很瘦。他有一个小的胡子,所以他很英俊,但他文静。
他很喜欢企鹅,上周,他很有趣,因为他去了动物园。他告诉我,“一个国家,企鹅是最可爱的!”
他想成为一名店员,因为店员是有趣的工作,我也喜欢,但是他想成为一名店员在宠物孢子,我想服装店。
I have new pen pal,do you know my new pen pal?
He has a short straight black hair,he is tall and he is thin.He has a little beard,so he is very hangsome,but he is quret.
He is very like penguin ,last weekend,he was fun,because he went to the zoo.He tall me,“on country,penguin is most cute!”
He wants to be a shop assistant,because shop assistant is interesting job,me too,but he wants to be a shop assistant on pet spore,my wants to be on clothing stores.

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1 John的新面貌 2我最喜欢的食物 3海滩上的人 4我的工作 5我的新笔友