Don't forget the things once you owned.Don't give up the things that belong to you and keep those lost things in memory.有没有语法错误?

Don't forget the things once you owned.
Don't give up the things that belong to you and keep those lost things in memory.
有没有语法错误?

意思是：属于自己的,不要放弃.
已经失去的,留作回忆.
没有语法错误.

没有
完全正确的语法

没有啊

我觉得挺错的
Don't give up your own things and keep those lost in memory.
就好啦，累赘的东西我觉得根本不需要。
things 重复太多了，不需要，lost过去分词后置作定语

没语法错误