以 Jim‘s birthday 为题,根据提示写一篇短文,50词左右.（提示在问题补充里）提示：今天是10月16日,是吉姆的生日,他在家举行生日聚会.许多朋友来吉姆家参加聚会.他们送给吉姆许多礼物.他非

以 Jim‘s birthday 为题,根据提示写一篇短文,50词左右.（提示在问题补充里）
提示：今天是10月16日,是吉姆的生日,他在家举行生日聚会.许多朋友来吉姆家参加聚会.他们送给吉姆许多礼物.他非常喜欢这些礼物.大家都很高兴.

Today is October 16 and is Jim's birthday.He has a lot of friends ,so he holds the birthday party at home.There are many friends to Jim's house to attend the party.They give Jim a lot of gifts.He is very fond of these gifts.Everybody's happy.

Today is 16 of October which is Jim's birthday.He holds his birthday party at home. He has a lot of friends and all friend comes to his party. They give many presents to Jim. He also very like their g...

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Today is 16 of October which is Jim's birthday.He holds his birthday party at home. He has a lot of friends and all friend comes to his party. They give many presents to Jim. He also very like their gifts. Everybody is very enjoy.
【i hope you will like this 】^^
p.s. if you have any question, you can find me:)
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Today is October 16, is Jim's birthday, and he held at home the birthday party. Many friends to Jim's house to the party. They gave Jim a lot of gifts. He is very like these gifts. Everybody is very happy.