请高手帮改改英语作文,谢谢!Dear friends Here are my points. We students of today have to pay much attention to our lessons and know little of society though it is not our fault. A holiday is the best time to make up of that. Taking a port-

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Dear friends
Here are my points. We students of today have to pay much attention to our lessons and know little of society though it is not our fault. A holiday is the best time to make up of that. Taking a port-time job is a good form of social practice. In social practice, we can surely make progress in both knowledge and ability. Besides taking a part-time job, we can get paid. Thus I’ll say a student should take a part-time job in holidays, if possible, of course.

Dear friends
Here are my points.We students of today have to pay much attention to our lessons so that we know little about society though it is not all our fault.So a holiday could be the best time for us to make up for that.As we know,taking a part-time job is a good form of social practice through which we can surely make progress with both knowledge and ability.Besides,we can get paid by means of taking a part-time job.Thus I’ll say a student should take a part-time job in holidays,if possible,of course.

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My opinion is as following. Nowadays,we students have payed too much attention to our lessons and know little of the society though it is not our fault. A holiday is the best time ...

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Dear friends
My opinion is as following. Nowadays,we students have payed too much attention to our lessons and know little of the society though it is not our fault. A holiday is the best time to make up for that. Taking a part-time job is a good choice to know more our society. In social practice, we can surely make progress in both incresing our knowledge and ability. Besides taking a part-time job, we can get some pocket money. Thus I suggest students should take a part-time job in holidays, if possible,

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Dear friends
Here are my points/views. As today's students, we need to pay more attention to our studies. That is why we know very little about the world/society outside. The fault is not ours. To...

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Dear friends
Here are my points/views. As today's students, we need to pay more attention to our studies. That is why we know very little about the world/society outside. The fault is not ours. To make up for that gap, we should take up part-time employment during school holidays. Part-time job is a good social practice which improves our knowledge and living skills. Furthermore, we can earn some money for our living expenses. Thus I am for students doing part-time jobs during holidays, if possible.

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好的文章不是华丽辞藻堆砌出来的，高分作文也并不一定要写加许多定语从句，要知道，语句精炼才是做好文章首先要注意的。
Dear friends ：
Here is my point. Nowdays, students have to pay much attention to their lessons, but they know little about the s...

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好的文章不是华丽辞藻堆砌出来的，高分作文也并不一定要写加许多定语从句，要知道，语句精炼才是做好文章首先要注意的。
Dear friends ：
Here is my point. Nowdays, students have to pay much attention to their lessons, but they know little about the society. It is not our fault. Having a holiday is the best way to make up of that and taking a part-time job is a good form of social practice.
In the social practice, we can surely make progress in both knowledge and abilities.Besides taking a part-time job, we can get paid. Thus I’ll say a student should take a part-time job in holidays if that is possible, of course.

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