yesterday after school,I went to downtown with my sister,and we bought four pillows for our sofa.

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yesterday after school,I went to downtown with my sister,and we bought four pillows for our sofa.

昨天放学后,我和妹妹去市区买了四个沙发上的靠枕.
修改的话,and前不要逗号吧
要不就是.we bought
要不就是and bought ...

实在不知道哪有错,我还以为是翻译
实在不行把 and 改为 then

yesterday , I went to downtown with my sister after school, and we bought four pillows of sofa.

昨天放学后,我和姐姐(妹妹)去商业区为我们的沙发买了四个靠垫。
应改成...I went downtown...
这里downtown作为副词
比如回家应翻译成go home而不是go to home,这里home就作为副词